Explanation: I am currently following a 5 day writing challenge and this was part of two exercises. Recently I saw some images on the news which upset me. In my exercises I was presented Rumi’s poem: Some kiss we want and Camille T. Dangy’s poem Characteristics of life and then I wrote this response to what I had seen. Soul poem: Why - to breathe is a luxury I speak for the underneathness Of all these people forgotten as an inconvenience The convenience of distance separates “us” As their lives are burning on the shores Burning up in the sun While we focus on what is current. Does God look down, does he smile or weep Does he have hands or feet or voice but ours For the terrorized, forgotten, and forsaken souls Crying for a drop of water And a crumb to eat? Where is the redemption Where is the victory Where is the LOVE these people need, If not coming from us? I speak for those people I stand and intercede for them For they no longer have breath to breathe As their lungs have caked and dried And their skin and flesh have fried. I speak for those that could not Find a way HOME For repose Oh World, Kiss the Window if you want I shall face The language, Looking through window. Kiss my language If you want I stay curious, Looking to the moon ““Moon Breath” Breathe into me Your gentle kindness” And she replies “Use the window As a language of kindness, Your love is not romantic; It is kind and lovely; Your language is not harsh It is kind and lovely.” Gazing at me in my pain Even if I pretend to smile, And she smiles. I reply: “The sun may burn But you want healing Bring me insight In what to do, Always what to do. As “being” may not be enough There must Be a response! What is my response? There must be a response For a way back home For repose.
Thank you for reading and have a nice day.
as always a warm smile coming your way.

What a wonderful poem. This should be published Morag!
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Thank you 🙏😄
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I believe this sums up your powerful poems very well….
As “being” may not be enough
There must Be a response!
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Thank you 💐💐
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Yes, we need to find a response. Thank you for your poem.
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You are welcome 🙏
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I could feel the passion to help, to be helped, to feel the suffering and the loving. Beautiful poetry!!
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Thank you 😍
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You’re welcome!
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Beautiful soul poem, Morag!!! So thought-provoking and deep. ❤️
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Thank you 💐🤗
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Soul-full and soul stirring Poem ♥️
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Thank you 😊
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A soul-filled & soul-full poem! 🌹🙋♂️
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Thank you for your encouragement 🙋♀️💐
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A soulful and thought provoking poem, Morag! I fully resonate with you.
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Thank you, I am happy to hear that 🙏❤️
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Always my pleasure 💖
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Wonderful poetry Morag🌸💕
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Thank you, I appreciate you stopping to read my post. Have a good weekend. 💐💜
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